4/5 Intriguing and at times a fun fantasy tale
I wanted something quick and light to read so I picked this and got neither. I was intrigued enough however to continue reading and overall I have to say I rather enjoyed the MC and the story. It was different from other fantasy books of this genre where the protagonist finds themselves transported to a new world they have to make sense of (usually in the first chapter) because in this instance ThinkTwice takes his time in the first third of the book to establish Dollar’s history and background which is conveyed in an engaging overarching style.
Whilst I appreciate this approach and the method, the book took a fair bit of time to get going for me and I found it hard to engage with Dollar or empathise with him. It was well thought out and great in establishing why Dollar was so successful in his business life but so poor emotionally. It added depth to the journey of self-discovery he was on but I found myself frustrated at having to wait so long for it to ‘begin.’
Also, with so much groundwork done by the writer occupying the first third of the book and the investment needed in understanding who Dollar was, it felt quite an adult approach yet the book and much of the action and adventure side of it are written like a live-action anime and for a younger audience, which is not to say it can’t be enjoyed by everyone. There is no swearing or graphic violence which lends itself to this. I’m just not sure if a twelve-year-old me would read the first 200 pages and be engaged enough but then it has been a long time since I was twelve to remember (I did read LotR at that age so….).
Without giving any major spoilers, it threw me a bit in Dollar’s new life that he was a newborn baby but I liked that he retained all his wit and know-how from his old life. He then ‘started’ his adventuring life at the ripe age of seven which all felt a little too incongruous to me but heyho, I stuck with it and there is a reason for it all. I just didn’t entirely buy it because the seven-year-old acted like an adult and other characters seemed to accept it and not question what a seven-year-old was doing out in the big bad world.
I would read the next book, for me the story ramps up about halfway through when Dollar ventures out into the wider world and meets up with two adventurers. For me, this is when the fun really started and I liked the new characters and their interactions very much. It injected some much-needed fun into the story in my opinion.
Overall, I enjoyed my experience. The story was clever and at times quite interesting and thought-provoking and the magic system was intriguing and different enough that it stands out in a saturated genre and the characters, particularly in the back half of our tale, lifted and carried the story.











